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Pirate England X Reader Part 1

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I was holding up a sword to my father's neck, about to slice him. I had it with him abusing me all the time! Whenever he got home, I was always hit, smacked, punched, and more! He would even take a knife a slice my arms or waist. I even have the scars to prove it and ever since mom died from him abusing her, he started with me. I wasn't going to take it anymore and I adored the fear in his dark, blood red eyes. I chuckled slightly and said to him, "Well well well, It is had for me to believe that my father is scared of his own daughter who he has beaten up and sliced and much much much more! You discuss me so much, I remember that day where I saw mom. She was screaming and pleading for my life when it was her that was dieing because of you! Do you know why she was crying and praying for my life? Because I sure do!" I growled and held onto the sword tighter, causing my knuckles to turn white. My father looked up from the sword to me a few times and finally said in his harsh voice, "That bitch got what she deserved! She deserves to die and so do you, you whore of a daughter!" That was when he went too far. Before I sliced his throat I responded, "SHE WANTED ME TO LIVE BECAUSE SHE CARED FOR ME MORE THAN HER OWN LIFE!! YOU WOULD NEVER KNOW WHAT IT FEELS TO LOVE SOMEONE THAT ISN'T YOURSELF!! I HATE YOU AND ALWAYS WILL!!" That is when I did it. I slice his throat, arms, and chest. I saw all the blood running down from him and saw his lifeless eyes looking up at me. I still saw the fear in his eyes. I looked down at the sword to see that there was no white spot on it for how much of my father's blood was on it. Even when he is dead, he still discuss me.

I walked outside to the beach after cleaning my sword and started to think. I was the only girl sword fighter in my small town. There wasn't much people here but we watched each other and are very kind to one another. I had a friend, Romano, who taught me how to sword fight when we were kids. He would always saw how he always wanted to be a pirate and he is one now. He isn't around much anymore and I got lonely and scared of my father. My mother died when I was only 6 and that day was the first day I knew what it felt to get a punch. I ran to Romano and he let me be with him for a few nights. I would always stay close to him at night with Romano's arms around me for protection. He was like my older brother that I never had. He would always be protective over me with the other boys and tell them that if they hurt me than they would die and go to hell. I remember that this one boy didn't believe him and pushed me to the ground a few times. Romano was SO mad that he almost killed that boy until I stopped him and had to pull him all the way to his house from the beach. He didn't live too close to the beach so it took a while to get him calmed down.

I was too busy in my thoughts that I didn't notice that there was a unfamiliar pirate ship landing right in front of me. Everyone was in panic and some of the other swords men came out. I shook my head and saw that there was a pirate coming at me with a dagger in hand. I quickly drew my sword and ran towards him. I slashed my sword up against his side. He spit up some blood on my face and fell to the ground, leaving a pile of blood running down onto his already dirty clothes and to the white sand. Some of the other pirates already took down a few of our fighting men. "Go back and help out men! I will finish off these pirates!" I yelled and without a second thought. The men who weren't or slightly injured helped up the men who are very hurt out of the battle field. Even though I am a girl, I am the best swords men there is in this town, as well as the leader.

All of the pirates that were fighting my men before, came running at me. 'Big mistake you filthy pirates.' I thought as I ran up to them with that dagger that the other pirate had and my sword in my hands. I sliced about all the pirates in the arm, side, and some in the stomach as my sword went right through them. I was close to finished with all of them until there was a small chuckle behind me. I quickly turned to have a sword up to my neck and a hand on my bottom back. I growled thinking of how easy the person got me. When I looked up to him in his emerald green eyes. He had blond hair with a few strands sticking out from under his big red had with a large white feather on the side. He had a harsh smirk on his face and I have to say, for a pirate, he looked pretty hot. He rested his forehead onto mine with the sword still on my neck. I showed no fear to him or anyone after what I had to live through all my life with my father.

"Now are you the lovely lass that keeps killing off my crew?" He asked in a mocking voice. He had a british accent that I could tell that many girls would and probably
had fallen for. I could tell because if he didn't have a sword up to my neck, I would have fallen head over heels for him. I growled at him not showing any weakness. "You know that I am you ugly pirate! I will kill you off too!" I snarled at him. He only chuckled once again and whispered into my ear, "Now love, how could you do that when you have my sword up to you?" I couldn't believe it! This pirate was mocking me! I growled and tried my best to look away from him. He made a 'tsk' noise and lifted  the sword up to my chin, forcing to look up at me. He looked down and up on me and chuckled at few spots which I have a clue on what spots they were. I smirked and said, "You like what you see captain?" He looked back up at me and chuckled once again. "I have a deal for you poppet." He started to say. I raised an eyebrow questioning him. "How about you be apart of my ship, love." I responded back, "And what if I say no? What will you do then?" He called for his pirates that were still alive and said, "I will send all my pirates to kill everyone on here and you will have to witness it all and you can't do a thing about it and I will kill you off last. Think wisely love."

My eyes widen at the thought of seeing all the people that I help and cared for getting killed. I could hear their screams now and while I watch it all and can't do anything
about it. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. "You promise that you won't ever come back here and won't harm anyone here if I come with you?" I asked and he said that I have his word. I opened up my eyes and looked up at his with hatred. "I will join you on your damn ship." He whispered into my ear and said, "Welcome to your new home love. I know you will have the time of your life." He smirked and signaled to get all the pirates back onto the ship and he pushed me onto 'my new home'.
Here is chapter one of a Pirate Iggy X Reader story. Hope you guys like it!
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The story was good, exciting, and overall an interesting Iggy fanfic.

However there were a few thing that made the reading difficult.

Some parts were especially confusing because of either bad grammar or poor spelling.

One part that threw me was that the reader didn't see the ship until she was pretty much next to it. A bit unbelievable. Even in a fluff piece, there's only so much embellishing a writer can get away with.

Also, the use of modern slang mixed with 'pirate talk' gave the story an inconsistency. Try picking a time period and sticking to it. It will strengthen your story.

Hope this helps.