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France X Reader: First Crush"Yo dude! Ready to go to the party?" Alfred, one of your friends, yelled outside of your door. "You are so slow _____!""I need time to get ready Alfred! I need to look my best!" You shouted at him while making one last curl in your hair. You were wearing your favorite dress with matching boots. You curled up your hair and had a tiny white bow in it. You had on that one necklace that your friend, Elizibeta, gave to you. It was a small golden heart.You opened up the door to see Alfred in awe once laying his eyes on you. "WOW ____! You don't look like yourself. You look like a hot chick!" You gave him a strong punch in the arm for that comment. Even though you didn't look like yourself, he can still say the stupidest things at times. "Lets just go before I kill you." You growled at him as he grabbed him arm in pain.Alfred took you to his party and it looked like an all boys party. You were the only girl that was there! Alfred was about to walk off until you stopped him and pulled him b
Chibi England X Chibi Reader: First DateI was still a young girl at the time and was wearing my new dress. It was a purple dress and I curled up my hair. I was walking around to the pond area where I first met Francis and Arthur. I was supposed to meet Arthur today for some reason. I wanted to look my best for him since I had a bit of a crush.I got to the pond and didn't see him anywhere. "Arthur? Where are you?" I asked to get no response. I sat down and looked at my reflection to see if I looked my best. I kept thinking things like,'Is my hair too curly?' and 'Is he even coming?'I closed my eyes and yawned. It was pretty early, even for Arthur. I felt as if I was drifting off and lied down, putting my head into my arms. I don't know how long it was but I felt someone shake me. "Come on! Wake up woman!" I heard in my ear.I slowly opened up my eyes and yawned loudly. "W-What..." I said and sat up. I rubbed my tired and sleepy eyes. I got focused and looked up to see that there were beautiful, emerald green eyes. I smiled
England X Reader~England's Perspective~I was walking out of my house to see my friend and crush, _____. She had (h/c),(e/c), and just the cutest laugh I had ever heard of. I invited her to go to the park with me and to my surprise, she said 'yes'! The smile on her face made my heart do a back flip!I approached her house and got really nervous. I started shaking as I knocked on the door. "I'm coming!" She yelled. She opened the door and looked stunning as ever! She had her hair down, wearing a blue tank-top with a white rose imprinted on the side, and had short blue shorts on. I just kept eyeing at her amazing body. She was well fit and just plain beautiful."England? Hello, you on earth?" I heard her say and moved my eyes to hers. I felt my cheeks getting warm. "S-Sorry ____, I was just....uhh thinking." STUPID STUPID STUPID! A gentleman shouldn't stair!! I mentally slapped myself. I heard her giggling and smiled."Shall we go?" I asked and offered her my hand. She gratefully took it respondi