Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login

:iconespeon10: More from espeon10

More from DeviantArt


Submitted on
September 24, 2012
File Size
6.0 KB


312 (1 today)
3 (who?)
Question below story for everyone. Please read!

You were outside playing basketball with all you guy friends. Lets face the facts, you were a tomboy which meant that you hated dresses, skirt, flirting, and worst of all, makeup! (scary music in the background) Just the thought of makeup made you shudder with fear. Anyways, you don't have any girl friends and liked it that way! You didn't care about what the other girls thought of you since you were happy to be with guys who treated you like one of them. Half of the girls at your school told you things like, 'You are such a bitch for hogging all the hot and sexy guys!' and others were thought that the guys were theirs only and would try to beat you up but since you were really strong you kicked all their asses and laughed at them in the end since they don't know when they had enough.

"______! Over here! I'm open I'm open!" Alfred called and you tossed it to him, he then made the shot and scored the winning point for your team. Your team was Alfred, Ivan, and Francis. Your other friends Arthur, Ludwig, Antonio, and Gilbert were against you. All of them were the best on the boys basketball team and they all try to convince the coach into letting you on the team. The only reason why you can't was simple, you are a girl.

You high fived Alfred and said, "Great shot!" Alfred smiled at you and gave you one of his famous bear hugs. "" You wheezed out. Even though you were a tomboy, you couldn't handle his bear hugs. His brother Arthur had to separate the both of you.

"Alfred, remember that she can't handle your hugs at times. Are you alright ______?" He asked and you gave him a smile and a nod. Arthur was one of those gentleman. He was very polite to girls and had a, even you had to admit it, sexy british accent. He was born in England and Alfred was born in America. Even though Arthur doesn't admit it, he does care for Alfred since Alfred can be a child. Lets face it, he IS a big child! If you ever meet him, never watch scary movies with him. You made that mistake once and aren't going to make it again.

You felt someone squeeze your rear and jumped a little. You knew that it had to be either Francis, Antonio, or Gilbert. Most likely Francis though and turned around to see that you were correct. It was Francis. "Ma chérie~ Why must you be so pretty?~" He said. Here we go again!

"Francis I already told you! I'm not interested in you that way!" You growled and he only smirked at you and grabbed your waist. "Ah but you will give in soon my little rose~" You growled at him but got pulled away. Francis was the king of perverts! There was no doubt about it but he was still your friend. He is french so he got most girls as well with his accent. He was apart of this thing called the Bad Touch Trio that Francis, Gilbert, and Antonio made up. You laughed at the name. Gilbert is Ludwig's older brother even though Ludwig is taller then him. Ludwig is a very strong guy. He and Gilbert are German, even though Gilbert calls it Prussian for him. Believe it or not, Ludwig isn't straight. He is dating this one sweet guy named Feliciano. Feli, what you like to call him, is very adorable and sweet but is a wimp. He is Italian and runs to Ludwig for help even for the tiniest things there is. He has a brother named Romano who always turns red when you are around.

"Ve~ Oh Ludwig!~ I came to watch you play!~" Feliciano came running up to all of us and kissed Ludwig on the cheek. We are all used to Ludwig and Feliciano being a couple and don't make fun of them or anything. "Feliciano, the game is over. It started an hour ago!" Ludwig said. Feliciano frowned and looked down upset. "I wanted to see you play though..." Ludwig kissed him which made Feli smile. Romano soon walked up and looked pissed as usual.

"FELICIANO I TOLD YOU WHAT TIME IT WAS YOU BAST..." He started yelling until you and him made eye contact and his face started going red again. He turned around away
from you and crossed his arms. "What are you doing here _____?!" He hissed at you. You walked towards him and said, "I was playing basketball with my friends." You
got tired of him always being mean to you and was going to fight back this time no matter what.

"A GIRL should not play a guy spot you idiot!" He said and with that, he crossed the line! You turned him around and pulled up your fist to his face. He backed away a bit and held his nose in pain. He looked at you with shock as well as everyone else. You were about to attack him again until Arthur, Alfred, Ludwig, and Feliciano held me back. I was THAT angry at him that it took the 2 strongest guys there was to hold me back.(Alfred and Ludwig)

I struggled for them to let me go. Francis, Gilbert, Antonio, and Ivan were near Romano. You stopped struggling but Ludwig and Alfred still held onto you. "Wow Dude! That was not cool!" Feliciano looked at you upset and asked, "Why...Why did you hurt big brother Romano?!" He looked angry and upset. I growled at him then looked at Romano and said, "IT'S BECAUSE HE TREATS ME LIKE CRAP AND I'M SICK OF IT!! I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY HE IS SO SHOCKED, HE GOT WHAT HE WAS ASKING FOR!!" You growled and everyone looked back at Romano. Romano looked down and walked away. You turned around and walked the other way, you stomped your feet to the ground as your knuckles started to turn white for how hard you were making fists.

Everyone looked from Romano to you and back to Romano again. "Who should talk to _____?" Ivan asked. Most eyes fell on Arthur who let out a sigh. They all knew that he liked you plus he was about the only one who could calm you down. He was also the only one who was brave enough to say that he liked you, even though everyone else liked you. "Fine. I'll go and calm her down but you wankers go talk to Romano." With that everyone went on their way.
Here is the first chapter on this. Who will admit to YOU that they like you first? You pick out on who you want out of these guys.
1: Francis/France
2: Arthur/England
3: Ivan/Russia
4: Gilbert/Prussia
5: Romano/South Italy (Sorry people who think Perverted like myself)
6: Antonio/Spain
7: Alfred/America
Please look at these stories and please vote! [link] [link] and [link]
Add a Comment:

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

Aptinodytis Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
Russia! ^J^
Juicy-Peach Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
"One with Russia, Da?".....
Nuff said.....
Purpletaconinja Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i loved that! and i think you should do Romano.
espeon10 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Writer
Ok thanks!
CheshiringWonders Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
England,(because he's so hot he could kiss himself jk)because he's sweet. :iconchibienglandplz:
espeon10 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Writer
Ok thanks. And I would pick Iggy too.
umbreon2257 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmm I think you already know my answer :iconsexyamericaplz: And your not the only one that gets perverted thoughts when you think about South Italy XD
espeon10 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Writer
Ok America, got it! And I know that. Just had to put it on there.
BlueRoses02 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ROMANO! I just love him! :D
espeon10 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Writer
Ok thanks! I am guessing that you yelled at the story when I said that the reader punched him?
Add a Comment: