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I love you with all my heart Feliciano! Don't ever forget about that!" Feliciano then kissed me and said, "I love you _____."


~~Feliciano's POV~~

I looked at ______ and was willing to tell her. "I-I need to tell you something __-_____." She looked up at me and I whipped her eyes. I stroked her hair and pressed my lips on her forehead. "I lied to you about some things." She face looked very surprised. I felt guilty for this. I gulped and then kept talking, "I-If I keep you h-here...T-Then I-I either kill you to t-turn you into a a-angel or....I w-would have to t-turn into a h-human....I-I'm s-so sorry Bella!" She looked down and seemed like she was thinking of what to do. She was starting to cry again. I held onto her and kissed her cheek. Now all I wanted to do was make her feel better and to pleasure her. Her being upset made me want to kill myself again. I kissed her cheek and I started to trail down her neck, giving her butterfly kisses on her neck. It made her very happy from her moaning slightly.

~~Your POV~~

I was getting kissed by Feliciano softly on my neck. Somehow it made me think better, and of course it made me calm down! I moaned a little and then I breathed out, "F-Feliciano.....I-I want to be with you.....I-I want to b-be an you....." Feliciano stopped giving me kisses on my neck and looked up at me. He was really shocked. He took my hands into his and said, "B-But....______.....You don't have to die! I-I'll become a human again! I'll protect you from Alfred! I will have to kill you or one of the Head Angels. I-I don't want to kill you or let anyone else kill you!" He started to cry and shook my arms slightly. "P-Please! I-I love you! I wouldn't stand being there watching a angel kill you!"

With each word that he said, I felt like bursting it into tears once again but I stopped myself. I gently moved my hands onto Feliciano's shoulders, looked him in his eyes and said, "Feliciano. First, stop crying. It breaks my heart when you are upset..." He snuffled and stopped crying his heart out. I continued talking, "...Second, I want to be with you. I know that you want to protect me from Alfred and you have but...I know how strong he is! I know that without your magic as an angel, you can't beat Alfred...He will kill you again and then kill me. Please understand that. Last, I made my decision. I am going to die to be with you Feliciano. That is what I want and I know that you wouldn't kill me but know what if I die, then we can be together forever and ever."

I looked at him. I was serious of this! I know that Alfred would kill him and then before killing me, rape me. I shivered that the thought slightly but I made sure not to show it. I gently gave him a quick kiss. He thought about it for a while and then nodded. Just on time, the Head Angel Arthur came in. He had a guilt look on his face and I knew that he came here to apologize for yelling and making me cry.

"______ I-" I didn't let him finish and I got up and hugged him. I brought my mouth to his ear and whispered, "Don't worry...I forgive you." I let go of him and he seemed a little stunned at my actions that he was blushing. He quickly looked away and said, "F-Feliciano...Have you told her yet?" Feliciano nodded and responded sadly, "Ve...She knows....a-and...Wants to kill herself t-to be with m-me....I-I've known you t-the longest and want y-you to kill her Head Angel A-Arthur."

Arthur looked back at me and was full of shock then he looked at Feliciano and stuttered, "Y-You want ME to kill HER?!?! B-But-"

"Just do it! I need to be with her Arthur!...I-I mean H-Head Angel Arthur..." This was a shock to me and Arthur because Feliciano wasn't the type to yell and hearing him yell and at a Head Angel must have been bad..And very surprising.

Arthur seemed to be thinking about something and I know that he was thinking about killing me or have another Head Angel do it because after a while he said....

"Alright...I'll kill her."
Here is part 7 and You are going to get killed....Sorry about that but it was your a way I guess.....whatever! Just don't kill me because I have angel England by my side to protect me!!

Part 8:…

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The-Adorkable-Nerd Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You say your working on the next chapter, but it's been nearly a year...
espeon10 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Writer
I am really really really really really really sorry!!! I truly am, I am so close to getting it done. Please believe that and I dont blame you if you hate me.
The-Adorkable-Nerd Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I dun hate you I was just sayin xD you should be more assertive and less passive x3 It ain't healthy ;{P
MarveltherealMC123 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMFG!!! I neeeedddd to knoooowwww!!
espeon10 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Writer
I promise I promise I am working on it please dont kill me!!
MarveltherealMC123 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. Don'tcha worry! I won't kill you! I just really need to know. Cuz this story is so freaking good!
espeon10 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Writer
Aww thanks~ I am glad you like it.
MarveltherealMC123 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But seriously. I need to freaking know.
WolfLover0925 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Dangit I need to knowwwww
RoseEmma1 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013

nooooo~~ :iconenglanddrunkplz:

I need the next chapter :iconenglanddrunkplz:

I have to know what happens :iconenglanddrunkplz:


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